tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post3373020563877896294..comments2023-10-20T08:28:27.175-07:00Comments on Writerquake: The Flair Flares: a poemLydiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-46489800164085405102008-08-03T10:43:00.000-07:002008-08-03T10:43:00.000-07:00Hi Lisa,Thanks so much for your comments and sugge...Hi Lisa,<BR/>Thanks so much for your comments and suggestions. I'm not clear on the rules for the forms you mentioned, but I'm really curious and will do some research on this! You're great :)Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-35783272276660369712008-08-03T00:03:00.000-07:002008-08-03T00:03:00.000-07:00Hi Lydia, I enjoyed this, and believe you could wr...Hi Lydia, I enjoyed this, and believe you could write a really cool FORM poem. Why not write a pantoum, or a villanelle?-- as these forms play well with the alliterative repetition you have created here!Lisa Nanette Allenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15263158091013515471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-60972456030867734862008-07-28T22:33:00.000-07:002008-07-28T22:33:00.000-07:00DFTP,And I envy people who create amazing short st...DFTP,<BR/>And I envy people who create amazing short stories (you!). <BR/><BR/>Mibsy,<BR/>Yes, you should and I should try to write a new one!<BR/><BR/>Honour,<BR/>Thanks much. My favorite line is that same one.<BR/><BR/>WW,<BR/>You can make a "flarewell" photo...:)<BR/><BR/>Lily H,<BR/>You are too kind and I appreciate your comments!<BR/><BR/>Bobbb,<BR/>We are kindreds, then.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Little Bird,<BR/>Yes, when you see the "(c) MLydiaM" at the end that is me. It's weird to not use my full name but...<BR/>I am SO happy you're back! Your vacation posts were grounded yet mystical and I don't know how you did that!Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-4389789912427747412008-07-28T21:08:00.000-07:002008-07-28T21:08:00.000-07:00did you write that? that's so beautiful... ... wha...did you write that? that's so beautiful... <BR/><BR/>... what a great reintroduction to your blog : ) it's been far too long, too long a vacation. I'm glad I'm back!robin ann mcintoshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02044109073424903154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-22113088134385670452008-07-28T19:04:00.000-07:002008-07-28T19:04:00.000-07:00Quite niceA very expressive momentStriking very cl...Quite nice<BR/>A very expressive moment<BR/>Striking very close to home...Citizen of Earthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03725229459557808120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-56300220063808189992008-07-28T18:11:00.000-07:002008-07-28T18:11:00.000-07:00what a sensitive beautiful poem, a classic!what a sensitive beautiful poem, a classic!dianasfaria.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10488357854017358868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-58640201434360539002008-07-28T09:32:00.000-07:002008-07-28T09:32:00.000-07:00Flarewell.....what a lovely sentiment...Flarewell.....what a lovely sentiment...Wayfaring Wandererhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02601279315250019787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-52077670474252175872008-07-28T09:13:00.000-07:002008-07-28T09:13:00.000-07:00Lydia, I really like this poem. In its unique trea...Lydia, I really like this poem. In its unique treatment of star-crossed lovers, even though they have to part... this poem emotes thankfulness and joy, not all angst and pain. Love it! My favorite part - "brush up the scents"!Roxannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13370629307564806889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-70844517209704590782008-07-28T05:01:00.000-07:002008-07-28T05:01:00.000-07:00Love it...made me chuckle, and I do love the inter...Love it...made me chuckle, and I do love the interesting use of words...I really should try to write a poem one of these days...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-89256609156984516302008-07-28T01:30:00.000-07:002008-07-28T01:30:00.000-07:00Great imagery, great poem. I envy all you people ...Great imagery, great poem. I envy all you people who can write non-rhyming poems and make them so vivid!Don't Feed The Pixieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05380146661526476947noreply@blogger.com