tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post5578882804993315332..comments2023-10-20T08:28:27.175-07:00Comments on Writerquake: Flash Fiction 55 — obligationLydiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-15027280215423848292014-05-26T08:16:04.398-07:002014-05-26T08:16:04.398-07:00Hello Lydia, thank you for your recent visit and c...Hello Lydia, thank you for your recent visit and commenting. I hope all is well for you. Time itself can indeed become dreadful without the peace found in those "zen-like space(s)." But oh, the sound of those cracking knuckles!Stickup Artisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00028394186285973772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-14758200754717402672014-05-13T10:03:42.644-07:002014-05-13T10:03:42.644-07:00You have mastered "obligation" in an ang...You have mastered "obligation" in an angular way in your poem. Your words are similar to real life when one is obligated. -- barbaraFolkways Note Bookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07168881905408345126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-45906158550643984292014-05-13T02:01:09.613-07:002014-05-13T02:01:09.613-07:00used the words nicely to convey your idea well wit...used the words nicely to convey your idea well with a thoughtful ending!!Smiles:))adhi dashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15945609464117886294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-78701694528157016802014-05-06T19:03:25.084-07:002014-05-06T19:03:25.084-07:00ah yes OBLIGATION- almost impossible to do if crun...ah yes OBLIGATION- almost impossible to do if crunched for time and not able to take a deep breath and make the space in time.<br />Excellent Lydia!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-82122730693092529572014-05-05T11:17:21.300-07:002014-05-05T11:17:21.300-07:00Cracking knuckles.. quite a good reason to be spit...Cracking knuckles.. quite a good reason to be spitefulbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-89172376431236794722014-05-04T23:01:47.277-07:002014-05-04T23:01:47.277-07:00fine pen and twisting ending ~fine pen and twisting ending ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-19856613145397834042014-05-04T19:32:28.360-07:002014-05-04T19:32:28.360-07:00love the wordplay here...so hard to find one's...love the wordplay here...so hard to find one's own space...very well craftedSumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-68373167259418155932014-05-04T17:41:17.154-07:002014-05-04T17:41:17.154-07:00Spare, yet ingenious.
Very nice.Spare, yet ingenious.<br />Very nice.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16747450215034568033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-80912934841257795842014-05-04T16:42:39.607-07:002014-05-04T16:42:39.607-07:00Oh I love that ending. You got it to a tee, my fri...Oh I love that ending. You got it to a tee, my friend.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-18090688343148455532014-05-04T15:42:12.347-07:002014-05-04T15:42:12.347-07:00How fun!How fun!Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-80769838026896270772014-05-04T14:38:38.238-07:002014-05-04T14:38:38.238-07:00ooh very nice. your playfulness with the words emp...ooh very nice. your playfulness with the words emphasizes the dread somehow. in spite of yourself. :)Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-49133650066709660762014-05-04T14:32:57.857-07:002014-05-04T14:32:57.857-07:00Wonderful Lydia! You also qualify as one of '...Wonderful Lydia! You also qualify as one of 'the lovelies.'Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-16843324103358203552014-05-04T13:31:05.673-07:002014-05-04T13:31:05.673-07:00How we do those few spare minutes, especially when...How we do those few spare minutes, especially when we can't really climb off the merry-go-round, is so important. I used to do both the knucle cracking and cutting off the nose ... but with those fragments now united, zen is possible. Fine poem.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com