tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post578752641471123497..comments2023-10-20T08:28:27.175-07:00Comments on Writerquake: My first magpie is Mag 29Lydiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-81494171856391910522010-09-20T12:11:26.725-07:002010-09-20T12:11:26.725-07:00susan~ How beautifully expressed are these impress...susan~ How beautifully expressed are these impressions of your child self! I would have like to know you as a kid, and am glad to know you now.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-54789026717618070642010-09-19T17:46:23.625-07:002010-09-19T17:46:23.625-07:00As an only child I remember one of my favorite gam...As an only child I remember one of my favorite games to play on long drives was to look into other cars and imagine what kind of lives those people lead. Although frequently frustrated about my own trapped condition, I never wanted to trade seats with anyone else. Each journey is unique and precious.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16747450215034568033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-67272768239231425822010-09-01T22:32:20.265-07:002010-09-01T22:32:20.265-07:00secretfragileskies~ That my piece brought to mind ...secretfragileskies~ That my piece brought to mind the (unfamiliar to me) Burroughs quote?...well, thank you for that! <br />Thanks too for the link to the ridiculous video of Glenn Beck. The guy is just a total jerk. <br /><br />Patience~ I appreciate your visit to my blog and thank you for your welcoming comments!<br /><br />Dick~ Your words meant a lot to me. Thank you for the encouragement.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-75300769019012776292010-09-01T14:28:09.423-07:002010-09-01T14:28:09.423-07:00Wow, strikingly original! Off and running from the...Wow, strikingly original! Off and running from the start. So intense and truthful, it read like an extract from some much larger work. I'll be interested to see what the next prompt might produce.Dickhttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-83590072193969211822010-08-31T08:51:13.390-07:002010-08-31T08:51:13.390-07:00great story, the flow was great, really held me ri...great story, the flow was great, really held me right to the end. welcome to magpie tales, hope to read more of your work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-38497937074487049202010-08-30T09:29:06.068-07:002010-08-30T09:29:06.068-07:00Lydia,
Powerful and beautifully written. Thank you...Lydia,<br />Powerful and beautifully written. Thank you. Made me think of this:<br /><br />"You can't show anyone anything he hasn't seen already, on some level - any more than you can tell anyone anything he doesn't already know. It is the function of the artist to evoke the experience of surprised recognition: to show the viewer what he knows but does not know that he knows." William Burroughs.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />re: Glenn-http://www.thedailybeast.com/video/item/glenn-beck-in-lederhosen/secretfragileskieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04463225545455119563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-12764224645988961262010-08-30T01:28:02.098-07:002010-08-30T01:28:02.098-07:00bfk~ A+ - wow; I made the grade! (You have seen th...bfk~ A+ - wow; I <em>made the grade</em>! (You have seen the new edition of Rolling Stone, right?)<br /><br />kathew~ Ha! That was great! Thanks much for your visit and comment.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-91652773236985372942010-08-29T08:55:18.768-07:002010-08-29T08:55:18.768-07:00wait til "Mom" gets yellow #7 in her foo...wait til "Mom" gets yellow #7 in her food at the nursing home.<br />Well written this painful memory...Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-44990913582561410832010-08-29T08:08:41.073-07:002010-08-29T08:08:41.073-07:00I'm giving it an A+.
It's about time you ...I'm giving it an A+.<br /><br />It's about time you got around to doing this.bfkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141624725868808411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-20549760251092737782010-08-29T00:20:47.229-07:002010-08-29T00:20:47.229-07:00Fragrant Liar~ Thank you for visiting and commenti...Fragrant Liar~ Thank you for visiting and commenting. I enjoyed my visit to your blog as a consequence. <br /><br />Hattie~ That was a great movie! <br />A dad just didn't seem to fit the picture. :[<br /><br />Stafford Ray~ I appreciate your kind comments. This was fiction and not at all autobiographical...thanks for feeling protective of the girl in the story. :)Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-7202984794253948282010-08-28T23:05:53.892-07:002010-08-28T23:05:53.892-07:00Yes, I would fight with her over the same issues.....Yes, I would fight with her over the same issues... well told story had me nodding all the way. I don't think I like your mom a lot! :-)Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-69522548146660142932010-08-28T16:28:31.977-07:002010-08-28T16:28:31.977-07:00That looks like Mr. Blanding's dream house. An...That looks like Mr. Blanding's dream house. And where was Dad?Hattiehttp://hattie.typepad.com/hatties_web/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-43338038563992656152010-08-28T15:16:23.333-07:002010-08-28T15:16:23.333-07:00I like how you put yourself into the picture and c...I like how you put yourself into the picture and carried us with you. Well done.Fragrant Liarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09452052210826471034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-85221124006549861592010-08-28T13:43:56.487-07:002010-08-28T13:43:56.487-07:00Teresa O~ Thanks for disliking her as much as I di...Teresa O~ Thanks for disliking her as much as I did when she popped out of my mind. :)<br /><br />willow~ Thank you for your comments and warm welcome. You have made a marvelous forum!<br />Funny, if I'd have known it was your home and not one from somewhere else I am not sure I'd have "gone there" about the feeder. Guess it's a lesson about writing honestly no matter the circumstances...<br /><br />Riyadh~ Thanks; glad you enjoyed it and I really hope you click over to Magpie Tales to find out about how it works. Write one, yes!<br /><br />Angie~ Aw, thank you so much. I bet everyone will be really envious when I say: I met Angie at a blogger meet-up last weekend and she is marvelous. :)<br /><br />kj~ But you gush...and I am honored by your comments. There should be free courses offered at hospitals or other safe places that teach troubled people how to care for their inner child. I really don't think it comes naturally, do you?<br /><br />Freda~ Thank you. :) It surprised me too. I had no idea where I was going to go with describing this cottage. It's proof that Willow gives wonderful writing prompts at Magpie Tales. <br /><br />signed...bkm~ I just love your blogger moniker! You are right; when the economy first went sour there was a report that perhaps one family in every square block was going without adequate food. It made me look at my neighborhood differently, and we donate monthly to our local food bank. (Sorry to get off track but your comment made me think...)Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-91431645106265948732010-08-28T11:17:49.252-07:002010-08-28T11:17:49.252-07:00Nice write and so many people protray an image tha...Nice write and so many people protray an image that is not ture to their real character - sometimes unfortunately they live in the same house...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-7079870107341914332010-08-28T10:21:43.117-07:002010-08-28T10:21:43.117-07:00Just for a moment I was left gasping at the revela...Just for a moment I was left gasping at the revelation and the fight...... then I realised. What a beautifully crafted piece of fiction. Fiction? It sounds so real!Fredahttp://www.freda.org.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-51735370946226063272010-08-28T08:37:54.885-07:002010-08-28T08:37:54.885-07:00lydia....
i came here this morning and i did not ...lydia....<br /><br />i came here this morning and i did not expect this. i agree with fireblossom: the last paragraph is masterful. i can feel the emotion and abandonment and coldness as if i am sitting on that walkway. and the way you tie the red 'metaphors' together--the bird feeder and the blood: wow, lydia, what a great read. <br /><br />what a tragic story. i hope this little girl will now be mothered lovingly, if only by her adult self.<br /><br />keep writing, dear friend. very very good.<br /><br />love <br />kjkjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-31251923871337044382010-08-28T07:09:51.336-07:002010-08-28T07:09:51.336-07:00Lydia, this is wonderful! You are so right. Who ...Lydia, this is wonderful! You are so right. Who knows what goes on behind closed doors? Welcome to the Magpie Tales, friend.Angie Muresanhttp://www.angiemuresan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-695907426917169692010-08-28T07:01:08.714-07:002010-08-28T07:01:08.714-07:00Nicely written aunt. I can imagine the whole story...Nicely written aunt. I can imagine the whole story right after my eyes when I'm seeing this picture after reading your post. Thinking of writing one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-50711053599202432872010-08-28T06:58:57.084-07:002010-08-28T06:58:57.084-07:00Wow, you had me at hummingbird feeder. Which is e...Wow, you had me at hummingbird feeder. Which is exactly what the bit of red is, hanging from the tree. The photo is from last year, and funny, since then have learned the red dye is bad for them and have switched to making my own sugar water. Excellent bit of writing. Welcome, welcome to Magpie!!!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-16101494602925816122010-08-28T03:25:41.693-07:002010-08-28T03:25:41.693-07:00I'm so mad at this so-called mom and bird-love...I'm so mad at this so-called mom and bird-lover! Well-penned, you grabbed me right off the bat and I couldn't wait to see where the story led me. Job well-done!Teresa Ohttp://writeinamazement.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-44306557094773118642010-08-28T02:46:16.195-07:002010-08-28T02:46:16.195-07:00Tumblewords~ (I was raised in tumbleweed country s...Tumblewords~ (I was raised in tumbleweed country so am drawn to your name.) Thank you for your kind comments.<br /><br />Fireblossom~ I think it is true, also. One of the confusing things in life is how those we love can make us feel good sometimes, horrible at other times. When they are gone sometimes what we remember is confusion. Your opinion about the last paragraph means a lot to me. <br /><br />Julie Jordan Scott~ I so appreciate your appreciation, and it is good to meet another "newbie."<br /><br />anthonynorth~ Yes, and pity the many children who never know a real home. I really appreciate your comments (and I like your name too because I have an older brother named Anthony).<br /><br />Brigid~ Thank you for saying that! Your comment made me smile.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-47618481577603506222010-08-28T02:45:52.536-07:002010-08-28T02:45:52.536-07:00oh i love your close...as you can not jusdge a boo...oh i love your close...as you can not jusdge a book by its cover neither can you a house...excellent magpie...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-54954320722081948302010-08-28T02:45:37.167-07:002010-08-28T02:45:37.167-07:00What goes on Behind Closed Doors.
A great contrib...What goes on Behind Closed Doors.<br /><br />A great contribution to this weeks prompt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-90383766216852198742010-08-28T00:14:53.466-07:002010-08-28T00:14:53.466-07:00That was a pretty powerful debut Magpie, the secre...That was a pretty powerful debut Magpie, the secrets that are hidden behind facades are intriguing,<br />great read.Brigid O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08646687391409208367noreply@blogger.com