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Monday, May 21, 2012

Mag 118 — the yellow clown


What I loved most about that clown
was that — out of everyone there
from the joyful crowd in my town —
he rode his unicycle to where
I sat because he noticed my frown.

I was just a tear-stained tyke
in a lonely sea of laughter.
In front of me he dropped his bike —
a trapeze swung high in a rafter.
His eyes expressed we were much alike.

He wiped a tear off his kind face
then folded his fingers with his thumb.
When he opened his fist he held a vase —
three buds for me: gold, white, and plum.
Then he disappeared without a trace.


Written for The Mag: Mag 118 that inspired with the above photo prompt  (The Circus With the Yellow Clown, 1967, Marc Chagall).

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18 comments:

  1. smiles....what an awesome clown...recognizing the one that needed him and then doing what he needed to fix what he could...nice little tale lydia...

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  2. Very nice...I like that he can wipe your tears away and give you some smiles ~

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  3. This captures that magic reality a young child lives in. Loved it.

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  4. It's interesting to think of a clown having such a depth of insight and emotion. And kids. We don't give them enough credit for what they feel!

    Great poem, Lydia!

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  5. Anonymous is me, sorry! Hit that option before I hit publish...

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  6. That's always happening: people come and people go never to be found again, except a Christmas.

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  7. Your clown is a kind clown ~ I like him!

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  8. Brian~ Nice to see something a bit uplifting come out of me, huh?!!

    Heaven~ Thanks; I liked that too. :)

    mythopolis~ If you loved it then I am happy. :)

    Phivos~ Thank you (and are you the one who checked the "Reaction" box?)

    Amber Lee is anything but Anonymous~! Thank you for letting me know that the lovely comment came from you.

    goatman~ Wow, your experience of Christmas is much different than mine has been at times!

    Helen~ I liked him, and loved those big soulful eyes. *;*

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  9. Lydia- this is exactly what I felt and saw as a child in the circus- wonderful poem!

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  10. I've read it three times through and it's lovelier each time.

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  11. Trellissimo~ Oh, so kind of you.

    Kutamun~ Thank you for enjoying it.

    Kathe~ That's great! I always felt sorry for kids who were afraid of clowns. Thanks.

    susan~ You made me feel very pleased and grateful.

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  12. Sideshows Carnival~ What a special pleasure to have a comment from you!

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  13. Lovely...with just a hint of a haunting feel...

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  14. Tess~ Thanks...I loved your description.

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