tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post5755242427494924916..comments2023-10-20T08:28:27.175-07:00Comments on Writerquake: Straw and ether: a poemLydiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-3512599252175980802011-11-27T23:25:22.690-08:002011-11-27T23:25:22.690-08:00hedgewitch~ I so appreciate your manner of critiqu...hedgewitch~ I so appreciate your manner of critiquing poetry. Your comments always teach me something and make me feel so grateful. Thank you for being there. (and you deserve a trip to a minimalist beach, lake or ocean!)<br /><br />Olga~ How beautiful and kind of you to say that. :) <br /><br />Mama Zen~ Wow, thanks much!<br /><br />ds~ Thank <em>you</em> for such a thoughtful comment! :)Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-81806544719303632382011-11-27T19:19:55.802-08:002011-11-27T19:19:55.802-08:00I love all the layers you wove into this, along wi...I love all the layers you wove into this, along with your silver, gold and straw. Wonderful, Lydia. Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-13967966184554560852011-11-27T18:08:04.397-08:002011-11-27T18:08:04.397-08:00Brilliant write! I love the images you conjure.Brilliant write! I love the images you conjure.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-10143689170755216982011-11-27T17:56:08.982-08:002011-11-27T17:56:08.982-08:00A very beautiful poem. It reminds me of waves, whi...A very beautiful poem. It reminds me of waves, which roll over and settle in the sand as words.Olgahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10652566920769043373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-13893224866531647552011-11-27T14:10:01.790-08:002011-11-27T14:10:01.790-08:00That first stanza, really lovely and delicate, spa...That first stanza, really lovely and delicate, sparse yet full of image, hooked me right in--I've read it twice now and it feels modern and bardic at the same time. Really like this one, Lydia--I seldom get to even a minimalist lake beach any more, but you brought that whole microcosm to life, as well as adding a few extra layers.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-17430966035443704952011-11-27T12:32:50.006-08:002011-11-27T12:32:50.006-08:00mythopolis~ Thanks for your cool comment! I see yo...mythopolis~ Thanks for your cool comment! I see you have been busybusy writing, and will stop by to read.<br /><br />bfk~ Loved your comment. Thank you.<br /><br />Appreciated the tip about memcache (thank you for your perseverance) and I visited Google Help Group, read complaints from others and some replies, and then cleared my browser's memory cache of everything as a first try to settle this mess.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-83080174894399565522011-11-27T07:58:52.086-08:002011-11-27T07:58:52.086-08:00Delightful imagery. Wonderful metaphor.
(PS This ...Delightful imagery. Wonderful metaphor.<br /><br />(PS This is my third attempt. Old Blogger® continues to have memcache problems.)bfkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06141624725868808411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-52146709117145420442011-11-27T07:24:21.255-08:002011-11-27T07:24:21.255-08:00I like this a lot. Something alchemical about it....I like this a lot. Something alchemical about it.mythopolishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03164758700393086005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-68063775502942926722011-11-27T00:46:03.683-08:002011-11-27T00:46:03.683-08:00Heaven~ You are so kind. I really appreciate you v...Heaven~ You are so kind. I really appreciate you visiting my blog without having a writing prompt leading you here! Means a lot.<br /><br />Eko~ I agree that the photograph is so beautiful! The photographer would be pleased to know you like it....her name is linked below the image. Happy Autumn from here to Finland.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-76276721550455168632011-11-26T05:52:06.163-08:002011-11-26T05:52:06.163-08:00Mainio kuva - mukavalla 'riimityksellä' ma...Mainio kuva - mukavalla 'riimityksellä' maustettu...!<br />Tie jatkuu... ja jatkuu... kauas...<br />Sinisen hämärän Terveiset EkoEkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00593080205863267360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4039445774186145767.post-60423393561668629222011-11-26T05:43:26.682-08:002011-11-26T05:43:26.682-08:00How lovely the form and words you weave about the ...How lovely the form and words you weave about the colours of life, gold and silver. Yet we all end up like sands on the seashores on the pathway ends. Beautiful reflections from your heart...I appreciate this ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com