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Sunday, November 18, 2012

Poetics: I remember Nogales


I remember Nogales,
just over the border a world
away we romped in our shorts
and college awe on the gritty
streets and in tiny shops where
smoke mingled with smoke,
where old cars and metal shacks
were a rusty orange-brown
and our painted toenails
were dusty from the road.

I remember Nogales,
with shelves of worms
in tequila bottles drowned
and sunk to the bottom –
and that woman passed out cold
in the heat of the dying day,
sitting drunk against a rusty
car with her dusty child
fidgeting by her side.



  

Written for Poetics — photography by Terry S. Amstutz — at dVerse Poets hosted this week by Claudia Schoenfeld, who shared with us the photography of Terry S. Amstutz, a.k.a. mobius faith. I selected his image above as the prompt for my poem.

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8 comments:

  1. ugh...that last visual is one that would be scarred forever on the memory..the woman and her child...i have a few of those scenes stuck in mine surely....

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  2. fantastic write with the dust, worms in tequila bottles, you captured the heat and the atmosphere so well...took me right there...sad about that drunk woman with her dusty child...gave a sting in my heart..

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  3. Ooooh yah me too- the dust, colors and probably tequila! I have a very dim memory of an afternoon/eve! Poor children... Thanks for a more vivid scene than I care for!

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  4. This was quite a romp with the smoke, dusty road and heat of the dying day. I specially like the ending of the second stanza, a tragic/sad scene ~

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  5. Ah, youth on a holiday, booze and fun and hot nights against the reality scorched in people who actually live there!

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  6. you are a painter, lydia. plain and simple

    love
    kj

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  7. I was reminded of Dylan's 'When you're lost in the rain in Juarez..."

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