Call Back the Day
When I leave you at night
I always look back
drawing a last melancholy ballad
from your eyes.
When you are
out of view, shivers
happen.
They slide
through me
like tears.
I call back the day
when you brush by me,
tending my ass
with your palm.
(c) MLM (Lydia)
Art: Meeting on the Turret Stairs-Frederick William Burton
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10 comments:
wow. that's hot!
-Steve @ fluxlife
Yes - very steamy!
Though i feel sorry for the Donkey (bad joke - consider my hand slapped!)
Seriously - "drawing a last melancholy ballad" - that's lovely imagery
I was totally NOT expecting it to end that way!
Well, I do like how you slip that last bit in at the end. But all of it is quite nice (including the labels: get your loving' at home).
You are an incorrigible romantic!
Who is the lucky guy?
@Steve- Wow (that's wow backwards), thanks!
@Pixies- Your comments, both complimentary and comedic, are appreciated as always. :)
@Wayfaring Wanderer- but, but, all (good) (and bad) things come to an end. :)
@Jennifer- A.Mazing that you'd comment on the label because when I tagged it that way I thought Jennifer's gonna get this, not for any particular reason other than your labels are always pertinent to your topics.
@Buddha- Thanks.....I think!
Oh, and you can find out all about the guy here ... :)
The last two lines are perfect.
@Spokane Erin- I thank you for thinking they are good. Mostly, thanks for being here. :)
How... touching. (Sobs.)
@Hattie- Your short comment says so much. Thank you.
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