The Shortest Day
The gathering begins shortly but
please, before you go, brief me
on today's news, for the print
please, before you go, brief me
on today's news, for the print
is too big for me to decipher.
Tell not the protracted version of
every little thing happening on our
shrinking planet — just your
short-and-sweet take on what
amused and what enthused you
on this shortest day of the year—
every little thing happening on our
shrinking planet — just your
short-and-sweet take on what
amused and what enthused you
on this shortest day of the year—
this December day
of festivals and rituals, this
Midwinter marker for forgiving
Midwinter marker for forgiving
our shortcomings and
forevering our
longing.
forevering our
longing.
MLydiaM ~ October 2011
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Visit Magpie Tales to read other Mag 86s inspired by the photo prompt above, an illustration by
Michael Sowa from The Little King December.
17 comments:
Beautifully written, very good indeed!
Well, your Royal Runtiness...er, I meant Highness...oh, that's not right either. Um...
i enjoyed it... nice! :-)
JJRod'z
this is beautiful...i really enjoyed it...it is written in a tender voice...of a mother or lover....
Oh shivers! I am not looking forward to this-thanks!
empathetically and softly written
Lovely.
I like how the so many of the words draw on the stature of the king for inspiration without mentioning him once. It's as if you wrote the poem first, then found the perfect picture to accompany it.
My Magpie 86 entry is Cepheus.
The last four lines say it all!
'forevering our longing' ... loved that line!!!
Deborah~ Thanks much!
magiceye~ I am pleased you do!
Fireblossom~ You are a wordsmith...you'll come up with the right word!
JJRod'z~ Glad you did; thanks!
Brian~ Thanks for saying that about the tender voice. :)
izzy~ Think of ways to be warm and cozy when it comes!
Kathe~ I appreciate that description. :)
Roy~ Thank you for your kind comments on this Mapgie. I think it is your first visit here, and I am honored.
rosaria~ Yes, I think they do. Thank you. :)
Helen~ Thanks; I liked it when it wrote itself!
So many interesting takes on htis weeks prompt.
Glad to see you carry so much culture in this one, thought provoking for me.
jane~ I agree...it is a community of very creative people there at Magpie Tales!
The Cello Strings~ Why, thank you. I appreciated your comment very much.
Love those last four lines...
Trellissimo~ I'm pleased; thank you.
Beautiful words, beautifully written.
Anna :o]
HyperCRYPTICal~ Thanks much, Anna. I appreciate your comment.
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