red sofa
The song begins
"I met my old lover
on the street last night,"
and--well--this is not
the same, but I met
my old lover's then-new,
now-old couch
on the street last night.
I could never forget it
or mistake another for it,
but I stopped the car to
confirm my find:
...
Slow, deep bass notes
rolled across the street;
but closer to the sofa
The Wind Cries Mary cried
in humming sound waves
under the freeway overpass--
as if the sofa held onto
a soundtrack of our
free ways with one another.
The red sofa still smelled of
scented candles, pot, Cheetos,
and our sex;
in its velvet skin
were waxes of varied colors,
small burns from hot seeds and
smoking embers, orange grease,
sweet-&-sour droplets dried in
subtle patterns of bump-&-grind.
I found my scratch marks
on the back behind,
the imprints of your knees
on the arms,
a yank of long blond hair,
the tip of a piece of leather strap,
and a piece of paper
crammed into the seat
against the back rubbed raw:
...
the cover from your
copy of the Kama Sutra
with my goodbye note
written on the other side.
MLydiaM ~ November 2011
Visit Magpie Tales to read other Mag 93s inspired by the photo prompt above (photo by Christine Donnier-Valentin). Want to give a nod to Mark Kerstetter whose "Wild" prompt at dVerse Poets for this week's Poetics set the tone for this particular magpie.
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21 comments:
how worrying that i recognised the song from just one line?
Homeward Bound, another S&G classic, was written at Ditton Station, 12 miles out of Liverpool. The station is no longer in use, but there is still a plaque to that effect at Widnes station (nearby)
Still Crazy After All These Years...is one of my favourite Paul Simon songs. I saw him on The Rhythmn Of The Saints tour and it was one of the best concerts i ever went to. Hearts & Bones live was just stunning as he started off alone on stage and half-way through the choir returned singing as they came...
I suspect that if i tried now i could still sing all the lyrics to You Can Call Me Al
And yet - the name of the person sitting half-way down the office? Not a chance :)
oh hell this is great...love all the textures and little details you give the sofa...and the note on the back of the cover of kama sutra...nice...excellent piece...
The scents...the textures...perfect!
Down to the smallest details!
Love this poem- I remember many of the 'seeds' you mention.
Really enjoyed the song through-the- tunnel ; very real!
From freeways to free ways -- excellent.
Lydia,
A wonderful write through all the tiny little episodes. The sofa is savvy to all the wonderful times the 2 hearts had together. You brought it out realistically. Great!
P/S Thanks for your visit earlier. Apologies for I missed to respond in time.
Hank
Powerful stuff, Lydia. And the last line . . using the cover of the Kama Sutra to pen you goodbye note is inspired though very sad in a way.
wow - vivid memories on that couch that you depicted so well! enjoyed this alot.
Whew. That was quite a detailed write! Those must be some seriously imprinted memories. :)
lydia, i'm reading this poem and i'm saying, who wrote this?! it is a gem. every detail that a couch could be, you've aced. all five senses packed into one couch. a beginning to end relationship buried into one couch.
i am clapping clapping, lydia. can you hear me? this is my favorite poem of yours and my favorite in a goodly time. xoxo
:^)
love
kj
You do write some wonderfully evocative poems. This is lovely.
I don't even need to read the rest of them to know that this is my favorite for the magpie this time. Love it.
Yes . . I was impressed by the irony in the last line.
Pixies~ Still Crazy After All These Years is one of my favorite Paul Simon songs, also. I envy you having seen him on that particular tour...gave me chills reading what you wrote. We saw the S&G Old Friends reunion tour, and it was wonderful--a very soulful evening of memories.
(Funny last line in your comment!)
Brian~ Okay, Brian, your saying this was great and excellent gave me such a lift on Monday. Thank you.
Tess~ So nice of you to say that, but your great prompt at Magpie Tales is why it exists at all! I'm anxious to read what others wrote from this prompt...
izzy~ So weird, I had not thought of those seeds for decades and they just "popped" right into the poem! :)
Berowne~ Thank you for your visit and kind comment.
kaykuala~ Geez, Hank, no need to apologize about not replying earlier. I am just thrilled to have you here now, and appreciate your comments!
Doctor FTSE~ I'm honored you found it powerful. It was a powerful image! The ending did seem sad but it was what I think those two experienced.
Sheila Moore~ Thanks, and, um, not all memories in this: portion fact, portion fiction, portion fantasy. I love how our lives can mesh in our writing. :)
Shawna~ Please see reply to Sheila above!
kj~ I'm reading this comment and I'm saying, kj wrote this to me??? Thank you so much! (hugs) And thank you again. :)
susan~ Your comment is so kind and I so appreciated it.
Fireblossom~ !!!!! This is the first time anyone has said that my magpie was their favorite for the week. Having you say that is such an honor. Thank you. :)
Trellissimo~ I have never read the Kama Sutra....just snippets here and there through the years. But I know enough about it (and life, certainly) to agree that the ending is ironic!
This is wonderful Lydia - thank you for sharing!
oh sad ending...didn't expect this... old sofas could tell thousands of stories...loved the one you brewed for us lydia..
Lots of memorable phrases here, just like all the memories left on that couch. Quite an epic for a simple piece of furniture! I really enjoyed this.
Oh, my. Who could ever forget this sofa? All of the details are perfect, and I love the irony of the ending. Wonderful, wonderful poem Lydia. Thank you.
jane~ I am so happy you liked it! Thanks.
Claudia~ Many thanks. Now that you used the word "brewed," I realize I could have added some beverage that surely might have been spilled on a couch.
Mary Ann Potter~ Thank you for visiting my blog and leaving such a fun comment. "Epic"...I got a real kick out of that description of the poem!
ds~ Thank you for your comment; it was much, much appreciated. (Tess has given us a prompt with a red umbrella and a red couch....what could be next, I wonder...)
This was beautifully composed, placing memories in vivid reality. Excellent.
anthonynorth~ Thank you very much!
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